Identifying Sentence Errors
Read the sentence and select the portion of the sentence that contains an error. If there is no error, select E.
Read the sentence carefully, listening for errors. If you do not find the error immediately, then check the underlined portion(s) against the Big 8 grammar concepts.
A. When you see a verb underlined, check to see whether it agrees with its subject and whether it is in the correct tense. The verb "began" agrees with "competition," and it matches up with the past tense in the sentence. This is not the error.
B. There are many pronoun rules that are tested on the SAT, but only one applies to "I." When you see "I" underlined in an SAT grammar question, check to see whether that pronoun should be in the objective case or subjective case. If the pronoun follows a preposition (about, between, by, down, etc.), that pronoun should be objective (me, you, us, him/her, them). If the pronoun follows a "being" verb like am, is, are was, etc., that pronoun should be subjective (I, you, we, he/she, they). In this case, the pronoun follows the preposition "between," so it should be in objective case ("between my brother and me"). We have found an error, but let's review the rest of the choices to be sure.
C. Check to make sure that this verb agrees with its subject and the tense of the sentence. The verb "suggested" agrees with the noun "mother," and it matches up with the past tense of the sentence. This is not an error.
D. When you see a pronoun like who, whom, whoever, or whomever underlined, check to see whether the pronoun should be in objective case (whom, whomever) or subjective case (who, whoever). Use objective case after a preposition, and use subjective case before a verb. A good rule of thumb is to use "who" when you can substitute "he" and "whom" when you can substitute "him." In this choice, we need to take that rule one step further because the pronoun applies to more than one person. Split up the statement into two parts, like so: "Give twenty dollars to him. He collected the most seashells." After you have done that, follow this rule: him + he = whoever; him + him = whomever. In this case, whoever is correct. This is not an error.
E. We already found an error, so E is not correct.
The correct answer is B.
This is a medium level problem.
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